Did you just finish your first draft or your third? Congratulations! You may have a fantastic idea, but screenwriting is all about the execution. Hollywood is a town where you get one shot to make the right impression and where readers will stop reading after the first typo or format issue. Your talent is as important as your attitude and work ethic, and it takes all three to standout in a very competitive marketplace.
Approximately 50,000 scripts/treatments/pitches/loglines and books are registered with the Writers Guild yearly while only 6,108 of the 20,000 WGA members reported any income last year in all mediums. When you also consider that only 34 specs sold in Hollywood in 2021, you have to be writing at a professional level to beat the incredible odds. The only real competition should be with yourself to become a better screenwriter, but if you have any doubts about your screenplay, now is the perfect time to receive professional consultation before you unleash your magnum opus upon Hollywood.
I'm a working screenwriter/script consultant, and author with over twenty years of professional experience and fifteen produced credits in television movies and independent features, a spec sale, and nearly two dozen writing assignments. I've been blessed to work and collaborate with Academy Award® winning producers, veteran directors, and Academy Award®, Emmy® and Golden Globe® nominated actors on my produced films. Many of these Hollywood veterans have become my friends and mentors and in this spirit of giving back, I offer professional analysis of your feature screenplay or TV pilot to help push it to the next level.
What I don't offer are promises to know what the studios are buying today (nobody truly knows). My screenwriting consultation services have been featured in Script Magazine (my blog was Website pick of the Week), and I've been a guest speaker at the London Screenwriters' Festival and contributor to websites The Script Lab, ScreenCrafting, The London Screenwriters' Festival blog, Movie Outline, Screenwriters Utopia, and The Buzz on Virtual Pitch Fest. I was recently interviewed by FILM COURAGE for their YouTube series with forty-two videos about screenwriting and also named by Screencraft as one of the "Top 25 Screenwriters to Follow on Twitter." I also have written a popular screenwriting book "A Screenwriter's Journey to Success" now available on Amazon with forty-three five star reviews.
If your feature script, TV pilot, outline, or short script needs help, my real-world experience and insights can help you bring your project to the next level. Your screenwriting career is not some Dali-esque delusion, but the result of work, talent, focus, sacrifice, patience and luck—when a prepared screenwriter meets an opportunity and delivers the goods.
PRICING FOR MY CONSULTATION PACKAGES:
THE SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS / EDITING / PROOFREADING PACKAGE: $ 295
(Screenplays over 110 pages—$2.00 extra per page)
The package above includes:
Same screenplay re-read: $195
PROOFREADING & FORMAT CHECK ONLY FOR FEATURE SCRIPT $175 (Page limits apply)
THE TV PILOT PACKAGE:
Hour pilot (max 70 pages)
Half-hour pilot (max 35 pages): $155
It's the same consultation services as the screenplay package, but for TV pilots.
PROOFREADING & FORMAT CHECK ONLY FOR TV PILOT (Page limits apply)
Hour pilot: $125
Half hour pilot: $75
THE FEATURE FILM OUTLINE / TREATMENT PACKAGE:
1 - 5 pages: $50
5 - 10 pages: $95
10 - 25 pages $155
25 - 40 pages: $195
In-depth analysis of story, structure, characters, and concept. (40 pages maximum).
SHORT FILM SCREENPLAY PACKAGE:
Script length up to 20 pages. Same notes as feature package but for short scripts.
SKYPE VIDEO CALL - CAREER CONSULTATION: $50 per hour (one hour minimum).
PRIVATE ONE-ON-ONE SINGLE DAY INTENSIVE SCREENWRITING MENTORING SESSION:
Available in person in Los Angeles only or on Skype/Face Time. $400 for one day consultation notes with a 2 hour in person or on Skype. Additional hours at $50 per hour. I can create a package suited to your specific needs.
ONE MONTH MENTORING -
$495 (feature script)
$395 (TV pilot script hour)
$355 (TV pilot half hour)
ONE SCRIPT - TWO READS PACKAGE
All payments for consultation services or mentoring sessions are made upfront to PayPal. Contact me and I will instruct you how to send payment to my Pay Pal account. You don't need a PayPal account to send money from your credit card. DO NOT SEND YOUR SCRIPT BEFORE YOU PAY THE INVOICE.
*** NO REFUNDS ON CONSULTATION OR MENTORING SERVICES.
***Before you submit your project, please read the Terms and Conditions Screenplay Submission Agreement in the next section. DO NOT SEND THE SCRIPT BEFORE YOU MAKE PAYMENT AND AGREE TO THE TERMS.
*** I have no interest in developing your project. It should be understood that the submission of your screenplay, pilot, treatment/outline, short screenplay, or mentor services is for paid consultation purposes only, and the criticism, notes, or suggestions you receive are yours to keep and develop if you wish.
Use the CONTACT FORM on the home page with any questions and to schedule your consultation. I look forward to helping you with your screenplay.
***Please review the CLIENT TESTIMONIALS on this page after the screenplay submission agreement
Please read carefully: By hiring Mark W. Sanderson (Editor) for his screenplay or treatment/outline consultation/editing services or mentor services, (Client) and Mark W. Sanderson (Editor) automatically agree to the terms and conditions set forth below when Client purchases the screenplay or outline/treatment consultation, edit, or mentor services.
Editor is an independent contractor and not an employee of Client. It is understood you (“Client”) have read this agreement and you (“Client”) hereby acknowledge and agree to all of the terms of the agreement as stated below.
Client has written a screenplay or treatment for a possible future theatrical motion picture production, television motion picture, TV series pilot, TV half hour or hour series, web series, video game, or short film.
Client submits to Mark W. Sanderson (“Editor”), the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment in the form of an electronic data file via e-mail, for Editor’s evaluation (consultation notes) and or proofing and editing. The Screenplay or Outline/Treatment is being submitted under the terms and conditions stated herein (this “Screenplay Submission Agreement”).
SCOPE OF WORK: Editor will read Client’s screenplay, and deliver one set of consultation notes (minimum of five pages) with an analysis of the story, structure, concept, characters, and dialogue. Also included: a script proofread, and a check for standard Hollywood screenplay formatting. In addition, Client can e-mail Editor follow up questions for a week about the consultation notes.
Full payment for consultation is due upfront on PAYPAL and paid to Editor before the consultation/edit begins. Client sends payment first to Editor, and then sends the screenplay via e-mail in a Final Draft software document or a PDF.
REFUND POLICY: There are no refunds for Editor’s consultation services. The Screenplay or Outline/Treatment consultation or edit requires one to two weeks to complete after the full payment is received by Editor, unless Editor notifies Client via-email that consultation or edit will take longer and both parties agree to the modified due date.
Client represents and warrants that he/she is at least eighteen (18) years of age, the sole owner and author of the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment; that Client has full right to submit it to Editor upon the terms and conditions stated herein; that the consent of no other person or entity is required to fully exploit the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment and none of the rights granted herein will libel or defame any third party or otherwise violate the rights of any third party, whether under copyright or otherwise. Client will abide by all applicable copyright and other laws applicable to the Editor’s consultation, including without limitation any notices or restrictions contained in this Screenplay Consulting Service Agreement.
Client has no obligations to Editor except as set forth in this Agreement, and no other obligations exist or shall exist, or shall be deemed to exist between Client and Editor.
Editor acknowledges that Client and or his/her heirs represent and warrant full ownership of the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment and all rights to the material.
It is Client’s sole responsibility to protect the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment, including filing or registering the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment with the Writers Guild of America or the United States Copyright Office. Editor strongly recommends that Client register the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment with one or both of the aforementioned parties.
If the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment is submitted by more than one writer (Client), all instances of the word “Client” herein shall be deemed changed to “Clients” with both writer’s names listed, and this Agreement will be binding jointly and severally upon all such persons (“Clients”).
NOW, THEREAFTER, in consideration of the premises and mutual covenants herein contained, the parties (Client and Editor) agree as follows:
1. All information disclosed by Client to Editor, in writing, whether or not such information is also disclosed orally, that relates or refers, directly or indirectly, to the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment, including the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment itself, shall be deemed confidential and shall constitute Confidential Information, and shall include:
(i) all documents generated by Editor, which contain, comment upon, or relate in any way to any Confidential Information received from Client,
(ii) any written samples of the Submission (“Screenplay”) or ("Outline") or (“Treatment”) received from Client together with any information derived by Editor there from.
2. Confidential Information shall not include any information:
(i) That Editor can show by documentary evidence was known to Editor or prior to the date of its disclosure to Editor by Client or
(ii) That becomes publicly known, by publication or otherwise, not due to any unauthorized act or omission of Editor or any other party having an obligation of confidentiality to Client; or,
(iii) That is subsequently disclosed by Client to any person, firm or corporation on a non-confidential basis; or
(iv) That Editor can conclusively show by documentary evidence that such information was developed independent of any access to the Confidential Information.
3. Client will disclose the Confidential Information to Editor solely for the purpose of allowing Editor to evaluate and edit the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment submission.
4. Editor agrees to accept disclosure of the Confidential Information and to exercise the same degree of care to maintain the Confidential Information secret and confidential as is employed by the Editor to preserve and safeguard his own materials and confidential information.
5. The Confidential Information shall remain the property of the Client and shall not be disclosed or revealed by Editor.
6. Editor shall notify Client of any determination it may arrive at with respect to the further development of the submission, provided, however, that, in doing so, Editor shall not directly or indirectly disclose any Confidential Information to any third party, without the consent of Client.
7. This screenplay consultation is a work for hire. Nothing in this agreement shall be deemed a sale or offer for sale or option of the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment, and nothing contained herein shall in any way obligate Client to grant to Editor a license or any other rights, directly or by implication. The Editor’s creative ideas, notes, edits, mentor services, and suggestions about the Client’s screenplay or Outline/Treatment, are given to the Client as part of the consultation service, and Client will retain title and rights to the work and suggestions/ideas created by Editor for Client. Editor holds no claim over creative suggestions offered to Client as part of the consultation service.
8. Because of Editor’s position in the entertainment industry, his own ideas, his social media accounts, creative collaborations, screenplays, screenplay assignments, outlines, treatments, pitches, loglines, TV pilots, video games, web series, short films, books, screenwriting services, screenplay and outline/treatment consultation and editing services, screenplay editing, workshops, webinars, blog articles, lectures, podcasts, and teaching, he is continuously exposed to screenplays, teleplays, novels, short stories, blog articles, newspaper articles, social media, formats, treatments, outlines, pitches, loglines, presentations, stories, films, web series, video games, and the like, which may be similar to those already developed by Client or related parties, or to those otherwise related to Client (and which may be based on underlying material owned or controlled by Client), and often many similar ideas or stories relate to one or more common underlying themes in different projects that may already exist. Client shall indemnify and hold harmless Editor from and against any and all liability, judgments, claims, costs, damages, losses and expenses (including without limitation costs and attorneys’ fees whether or not in connection with litigation) arising out of or in connection with similar creative ideas.
9. No Professional Advice Guarantee or Promise: The information contained in or made available by Editor in the consultation or edit of Client’s screenplay or outline/treatment for Client’s theatrical movie, TV movie, TV half hour or hour series, web series, video game, or short movie, or Editor’s mentor program, will not place Editor liable for any direct, indirect, consequential, special, exemplary or other damages, including economic loss, that may result from the use of, or the inability to use, the materials, information or strategies communicated through the consultation or edit, mentor services, or any products or services provided before or after the consultation, even if advised of the possibility of such damages. Under no circumstances, including but not limited to negligence, will Editor be liable for any special or consequential damages that result from Client’s participation in the screenplay or outline/treatment consultation or edit, or mentor services, from Editor.
To be clear: Client is responsible and accountable for his/her decisions, actions and results in life, and by participation in the screenplay or outline/treatment consultation or edit, or mentor services, Client agrees not to attempt to hold Editor liable for any decisions, actions, or results that Client makes or experiences in business or in life due to Client’s participation in Editor’s screenplay or outline/treatment consultation or edit, or mentor services, at any time, now, or in the future, under any circumstance.
10. All notices from Editor to Client regarding the screenplay or outline/treatment consultation services, editing services, or mentor services, will be via e-mail and receipt of Editor’s e-mail constitutes notice as being delivered.
11. Neither Editor nor Client has the authority to enter into agreements on behalf of the other party.
12. This agreement sets forth the complete and only agreement between Editor and Client, and may not be amended or modified except in writing and signed by all parties.
13. This Agreement may not be changed, modified, terminated, or discharged except signed in writing by both Client and Editor.
14. This Agreement, regardless of where executed or performed, shall be governed by, construed and enforced in accordance with the laws of the State of California without regard to the conflict of law’s provisions thereof.
"What's unique about Mark is that he's a working screenwriter of films that actually got made. So many 'script doctors' have never sold a single script. I trusted the first draft of my first feature to Mark, and I'm glad I did. The notes were thorough and reflect the rigors of working in Hollywood today." - Adam Vincent Wright, screenwriter of "Wise Guys"
"The level of detail, meaty suggestions, coherent/easy-to-understand directions, general writing tips, logline help, and overall professional competency demonstrated by you on my screenplay exceeded all expectations. It’s obvious you take your craft seriously; the product you delivered validates your accumulated education and years of practical experience. I know I will learn, improve, and grow as a direct result of your direction. A simple note of gratitude hardly does you justice. Thank you for your exhaustive efforts." - Kevin Bernadt screenwriter of "An Ornament's Tale"
"I first came across Mark being interviewed by Film Courage on YouTube. After visiting his web site, I scheduled a consultation and received invaluable notes on my comedy pilot. Do yourself a favor and get his insight on your script before sending it out. I will definitely use his services in the future." --Stephen Morrissey, screenwriter of "These Rock!"
"Mark's 5-star consultation service brings objectivity and clarity to a project with a fresh set of eyes. I recommend Mark and will consult with him in my future projects. His service is worth every penny." --Salvatore Bono, screenwriter of "Rock Tarpeian" and "Callers to Our World"
"Mark Sanderson provided me (a first-time script writer) extensive notes to improve my project. He taught me many technical lessons to help the script meet industry standards. Mark also offered storyline suggestions that will dramatically improve pivotal moments in the thriller as I complete my re-write. When you are a rookie, you are not sure where to turn for help, but Mark exceeded my expectations. Your project will be better thanks to Mark’s feedback." -- Mike W. screenwriter of "There is Life"
"I cannot recommend Mark enough. He read my script and knew what I was tying to say more than I did. He was able to pinpoint with such clarity the areas of my script that needed condensing, and showed me how to avoid micromanaging actors. Using his notes, I turned my script into a top 10% Nicholl script. Mark is a friend, and an ally that wants you to succeed. He is realistic about the tough odds in the Hollywood market, but encourages you first and foremost to write with discipline. Mark helped me turn my dream into a more concrete reality. I am so grateful for his guidance and you will be, too."- Rachel Redfern, screenwriter of "She Wore Blue"
"Mark has been an invaluable help in the development and improvement of my script. I've used other coverage services, and no one even comes remotely close to providing the helpful, detailed, and length of notes and advice. I would have paid twice as much for the professional advice and help he has given me." -- Dan Willis, screenwriter of "Mother of Grace and Mercy"
"This summer I reached out to Mark and hired him to do an analysis for a TV pilot I had written, and here's what I found: In complete consistency with my impression of him thus far, Mark showed up in the most professional way and over-delivered. I received back not only an analysis of my script, but what I call an entire learning package. It seems like Mark really studied the weakness of my work and addressed everything to-the-point with articulate notes that made it clear to me as to what I should be doing next. He combed through and did not leave one issue left unaddressed. His analysis proved once again that he is a master of his craft as well as an incredible teacher. I received script feedback before but nothing on this level, and I have no doubt I need to look no further - I found the one. Mark Sanderson is what I call a rare bird.
-- Kika Stayerman, screenwriter of "The Seaman's Wife"
"Mark was recommended to me by a screenwriter who had used his services for several scripts. Now that I've consulted with Mark, I'm yet another screenwriter who can enthusiastically recommend him! Having never taken a screenwriting class, I knew I was likely making formatting and style mistakes -- I just didn't know what they were, or how to identify and fix them. Mark filled in the gaps in my knowledge and his detailed notes gave me a clear roadmap for how to fine-tune my script. He also provided tools and best practices that I know I'll be using in all of my writing going forward. I'm currently submitting my script to contests, and I've already had a glowing review come back noting how "polished and professional" it was. Thanks, Mark!"
—Zoe Furlong, screenwriter of "Mika Pepper Monster Hunter"
"Mark’s feedback helped me break bad writing habits that I didn’t even know I had. The level of detail provided in his coverage made me understand where the problems were and how to fix them. He pointed out strengths in the script and not just weaknesses, which was a real morale booster. I was also amazed that he read the script more than once, which is above and beyond most coverage services."—Carrie Wachob, screenwriter of "Hunters"
"Mark Sanderson is truly a master of the craft. I have used other script consultants in the past, but I have found Mark’s experience and knowledge invaluable. I received fully detailed notes and in-depth analysis of where my script fell short, and where my script excelled. My script is a TV holiday movie, and his experience writing TV movies was very helpful to me. He gave some good suggestions on how I can improve it, as well as work on the proper pacing and word count on this script. In addition to the notes, he gave in-depth edits on the script that allows me to see where I can improve my dialogue and scene descriptions for a better read. I highly recommend Mark for a script consultation!" — Tim Northburg, screenwriter of "A Love For Cranberries."
"After completing a hands on, 8-week screenwriting workshop, I got Mark to review my comedy feature film screenplay. He was next level, I couldn’t believe, not only how fast he turned it around, but understood my story and characters in-depth. His feedback was on point and he included just as many positive notes as critique, making me feel positive and excited about my work. I would use Mark again and recommend him to anyone, new or experienced. —Vanessa Every-Burns, screenwriter of "Sologamy" from the land down under.
"Mark's immaculate feedback provided a clear, concise guide as to the strengths and weaknesses of our screenplay, highlighting what was and was not working, what there should be more and less of and - ultimately - inspired the next pass of drafting. His feedback is direct, honest, and impeccable. Highly recommended!"— director/screenwriter Mark J. Blackman, screenwriter of "Teardrop"
"I've used a few script consultant services now, and I can say without hesitation that Mark's was the most valuable. While others were helpful in providing useful feedback on a certain component or area of my script, Mark's notes felt truly comprehensive. I've incorporated his ideas to improve everything from general format/readability to the actual comedic elements. I look forward to getting my next script to a point where I'm ready to leverage Mark's insight and guidance once again." — Carey Dunn, screenwriter of "Materminated"
"There are many "script consultants" out there. Many of them are more concerned about enhancing their careers than about you as a writer. What I look for is one who has the professionalism and experience to see what I can't see in a script—to be my second set of eyes and give me feedback that I can use to enhance my story. Mark Sanderson read my script three times in a matter of days and provided an overview and detailed page notes with very practical and thought-out suggestions to enhance the script. You want someone who will take the time and personal interest to care about your work and about you as a writer. No matter how experienced one may be, having that supportive feedback means a lot in this journey. Thank you, Mark!" — Britta Reque-Dragicevic, screenwriter of "Restoration"
"If you are serious about your career as a writer, one of the best resources you'll ever find is Mark Sanderson. Mark doesn't give cookie-cutter, thoughtless advice, but he offers thorough, detailed and personalized service that is both refreshing and reliable. He is professional, courteous, and genuinely interested in your success. You won't regret the investment. You owe yourself the advantage of having Mark Sanderson on your side."— KV James, screenwriter of "The Wren"
"Mark was not the only consultant who worked on my script. But he was BY FAR the best. Hands down. I did extensive research before I selected the consultants I availed myself of and the extent to which Mark's work rises above the rest is shocking. So much so that I literally scrapped the analyses and input from the others and went with Mark's feedback exclusively. He broke down my screenplay gently and effectively—and one of the most helpful things he did was not just identify weaknesses but make actual suggestions about how to fix them (e.g. "TRY this..." or "HOW ABOUT so and so..."). He also explained why he made a certain recommendation or why he thought something didn't work. It will make future screenplays much tighter from the get go. He will make your screenplay a thousand times better; he will make you so excited about rewriting/reworking it you will literally run to your computer to implement his feedback; and he will make you a superbly better writer along the way. Another thing: he's a super nice guy. I wholeheartedly endorse his services. Do yourself a favor: USE HIM."—David Bassin, screenwriter of "Through the Sweetness and the Smoke"
"Mark provides an enriched and detailed description on how to grow your screenplay and writing. The criticisms force me to think about all aspects of the story and the specific suggestions allow me to jump quickly into a rewrite."—Moez Solis, screenwriter of "Angel Tendencies"
"Thanks, Mark for pointing out what worked and didn't work in my script. Your notes were very professional and helpful in what I should do in my rewrites. You opened my eyes, flashed out all my bad writing habits, and helped me understand how to become a better writer."—Alexander Verdant, screenwriter of "War Effects"
"I am blown away by your level of professionalism, expertise, and craft. Every insightful suggestion is planned for reuse in my next edit. You provided something of amazing value to me, thank you! " —Kyle Walsh, screenwriter of "Tiger Tiger"
"I hired Mark earlier in the year to help me with a comedy screenplay, his advice was valuable and it's since been requested by three producers and an agent. And later this year, I needed help on structure and plot on a studio spec and yet again, Mark’s notes were incredible, detailed and insightful. He helped me see things that I didn't notice because I was so close to the project. When I speak to producers, they tell me one of the biggest mistakes writers make is sending out scripts too early. Don’t be that writer. Get your screenplay read first by hiring Mark Sanderson."—Niraj Kapur, screenwriter of "For Better or For Worse"
"I have hired many script consultants in the past, but Mark has to be one of the finest. His critique of my work, and suggestions on how to improve it, without a doubt, has made the final product much more competitive and ready to market to TV producers. In the future, I will not hesitate to call on Mark's services again. Thank you Mark for your support and great advice!"—R. Lee Salkind Meliment, screenwriter of "Castleton Divide"
"I have used different script consultants, but I found Mark’s notes were so thorough, clear and brutally honest, I was able to go through them point-by-point, and came out with a markedly stronger and more marketable screenplay."—Ron Thomson, screenwriter of "Tour de Francine"
"Mark's in-depth and thoughtful read inspired more confidence in pointing out strengths, weaknesses and suggestions for improvement. His notes were invaluable in making this a stronger and more marketable script."—Cyn Brocar, screenwriter of "Kingfisher"
"Mercy just made the Page quarterfinals and I wanted to thank you. It would have never made it that far without your editing help. So thank you very much!"—Carrie Wachob, screenwriter of "Mercy"
"Blunt and insightful. Mark is like a hawk and could see the common, often repetitive, mistakes I made that I was oblivious to. His suggestions helped reveal gaps in the story that my mind instantly started to fill. In revision mode, he brings the format up to professional levels with pinpoint accuracy. There’s so much advice that you will want to implement as you read through his notes, that you’ll keep returning to them as you go along. There’s no way this won’t take your screenplay to a higher level. Best money I've ever spent so far in the quest to become a screenwriter."—Jordan Serson, screenwriter of "Day Dream"
"I've wanted to have my script read by a consultant, but shopping around in Hollywood online everyone was asking $1500 or more. I found Mark when I Googled him and he offered proofreading plus consultation. For the price, I did not expect such thorough high-quality feedback and he didn't pull any punches. The great thing was his grasp of the story and characters, and then knowing (seeing) a proper structuring of the events. I could go on and on about his suggestions and educating me, but to my knowledge, this is the best deal in Hollywood. So, you better take advantage of it while Mark is content to sell it at this price."—James Featherston, screenwriter of "Abattage Angels"
"I've been writing for many years in fiction and non-fiction. But screenwriting is an entirely different planet. When I decided to take a shot at writing a screenplay, I was overwhelmed by all the resources out there. I decided to dive in, buy software, and do my best. And then, when I was done, I found Mark. And "that's" when I learned what to do and what not to do. Mark's critique was detailed but easy to understand, firm but encouraging, and I can tell he's a perfectionist. And he's making me one too! I can honestly say that my work with Mark was the equivalent of a screenwriting boot camp. I loved every minute of it. And I'll be back, for certain."—Aliya S. King, screenwriter of pilot "Platinum"
"Mark was not the only evaluation I sought after finishing my first spec, but after receiving his notes and working with him, he will be in the future. Other services seemed to put me on the bottom of their list, pushing me out then delivering sub-par recommendations. With Mark's help, I was able to focus in on the core of my story and develop it from there. He dives deeper than the surface and seeks out where your screenplay might be flawed. His notes were specific, in-depth and extremely useful. He unearthed a gem in what have otherwise been a pile of dirt. I can't thank him enough."—Michael Brenckle, screenwriter of "Jackpot"
"Mark's gift lies in the fact that he's not only able to supply you with remarkably on-target insight and suggestions, but he's also able to inspire you to find a deeper and better version of your script. He understands your script, its strengths and weaknesses, and emboldens you to find the hidden genius within your own vision."—Paul Schattel, writer/director "Your Ass Is Grass"
"I was hesitant about getting ascreenplay consultation, because you hear a lot of mixed reviews. I'm so glad I did. Mark was the best thing to happen to my script. He gives really comprehensive and detailed advice. He found issues that I didn't even know existed, and really helped me get to the essence of my story. I'm pretty certain I couldn't have gotten to that point without him. The dude knows his stuff. I look forward to working with him on my next project."—Rayna White, screenwriter of "It's Who You Know"
"Mark really worked for me. In my case I got script notes, general notes, the whole nine yards. Easy to say I got my money's worth. If you want a successful screenwriter to take your screenplay seriously, meticulously comb over it giving you constructive contributions, work with your ideas to help you fill out your vision, Mark Sanderson is your man."—D.R. Bradt, screenwriter of "Born to Kill 2015"
"Mark's notes were right on the money. He sees a movie in a script, no matter how good or bad it is and brings out the best it can be. I am fortunate my screenplay passed through his surgical mind. Thanks, Mark for making me happy with my words, my screenplay, my baby."—Njedeh Anthony Ebinum, screenwriter of "Mind Crawlers"
"When I came to Mark for help, I had a 136-page Sci-Fi screenplay that a Hollywood agent and director had criticized for being overwritten. With Mark's help, the script was not only pruned to 107 pages, but many subtle formatting and pacing issues were addressed. To receive his extensive and detailed notes for such a reasonable fee was a real blessing, as was the kind and positive tone in which they were given. Two other pluses I should mention about Mark's services are: (1) he is a working Hollywood screenwriter and (2) he takes a real personal interest in one's progress."—Ray Chesin, screenwriter of "Blue Planet"
"I couldn't be more pleased with Mark's critique of my script. He's thorough, smart, knowledgeable, detailed, passionate, experienced, encouraging, talented, and affordable. What else could you possibly want in a script consultant?"—Jeff Thomas, screenwriter of "Cuda"
"After reading through Mark’s notes, it felt like I had participated in an intensive screenwriting workshop. He gave me so much insight into the process and provided helpful suggestions on how to improve my script. I have incorporated many of his ideas and am pleased with the final draft. Thank you Mark for helping me take "Between Land and Sea" to the next level."—Joanne Guidoccio, screenwriter of "Between Land and Sea"
"Mark has the ability to take an idea and mold it into an amazing story that touches others. With years of creating great work, he has a grand insight into consulting on screenplays that is a true gift. My recent consulting experience with Mark has resulted in personal growth as a screenplay writer and a stronger screenplay then I could have ever imagined. I am proud to say Mark Sanderson is my mentor and an amazing teacher." —Faith Fay, screenwriter of "Game On"
"Your suggestions and notes were very, very, very insightful and helpful. They were so thorough and every point made sense. You didn't just outline problems, but you suggested solutions to the problems which I admired. After completing these changes, I read through my script again and it reads much, much stronger. There were points you brought up that I hadn't even thought of before or knew much about. Your service was worth every dime, and I will be using you from here on out. THANK YOU once again! I owe you an Oscar speech!" —Justin Bamforth, screenwriter of "The Collectors"
"Mark' analysis exceeded my expectations on every aspect of my screenplay. I needed a pair of new eyes, professional eyes, that could help me realize the true story behind my first draft. Now that my "first draft fugue" has cleared, I understand not only what my screenplay has been trying to convey, but how to convey it. I am now beginning to sense what a true re-write consists of, but I couldn't be happier with the clarity and precision of which Mark's notes have guided me. Thanks a million!" —Will Stockton, screenwriter of "The Laugh Crafter"
"I wrote a feature comedy, but it turned out to be 274 pages when I finished it. After Mark came in, he taught me all about making a script "lean & mean." In the end after his editing, the script came in at 102 pages. The Scriptcat really knows his stuff.” — Brad Grunberg, screenwriter of "Final Exam"
“This was my second time to reach out for a professional’s opinion. Mark's review, by far, was the most constructive and insightful. Well worth the money! Having feedback from someone who has already been there and done that is important to those of us who are amateur writers and do it for the joy of writing and creativity. Of course, we all have the dream of one day bringing the characters to life. Thank you for the detailed advice to improve my sitcom.” —Chris Parman, screenwriter of “Tulsa’s Crude”
“Mark gave me great notes. Being a professional screenwriter, he knows the industry standards and gives not only advice that you would get from taking a screenwriting class, but also an experienced industry perspective. A very reasonable, reliable, and helpful guy.” — Nick Josephs, screenwriter of "As the Crow Flies"
"For anyone who is looking for a professional writer and script doctor, I would highly recommend Mark. I'd say, if you are looking for a professional writer to walk that extra mile with you on your script, look no further! My script is based in India, and he knew my story and the characters as well as I do. He is extremely dedicated and into his work." — Earl Reginhard, screenwriter of "Zia"
"When I came to Mark with my screenplay I was stuck. I knew that it was too long, but wasn't sure where to begin cutting. Mark's advice was exactly on the money. Not only did he steer me in the right direction to get it where it needs to be, but he also gave me the feedback that I wasn't getting by having my friends read the script. Thanks!" — Tony Jones, screenwriter of "Chuck My Life"