Did you just finish your first  draft or your third? Congratulations! You may have a fantastic idea, but screenwriting is all about the execution. Hollywood is a town where you get one shot to make the right impression and where readers will stop reading after the first typo or format issue. Your talent is as important as your attitude and work ethic, and it takes all three to standout in a very competitive marketplace.

Approximately 50,000 scripts/treatments/pitches/loglines and books are registered with the Writers Guild yearly while only 6,057 of the 13,000 WGA  members reported any income last year in all mediums. When you also consider that only 32 specs sold in Hollywood in 2019, you have to be writing at a professional level to beat the incredible odds. The only real competition should be with yourself to become a better screenwriter, but if you have any doubts about your screenplay, now is the perfect time to receive professional consultation before you unleash your magnum opus upon Hollywood.  

I'm a working screenwriter/script consultant, and author with over twenty years of professional experience and fifteen produced credits in television movies and independent features. I've been blessed to work and collaborate with Academy Award® winning producers, veteran directors, and Academy Award®, Emmy® and Golden Globe® nominated actors on my fifteen produced films and twenty-three screenwriting assignments. Many of these Hollywood veterans have become my friends and mentors and in this spirit of giving back, I offer professional analysis of your feature screenplay or TV pilot to help push it to the next level.

What I don't offer are promises to  know what the studios are buying today (nobody truly knows). My screenwriting consultation services have been featured in Script Magazine (my blog was Website pick of the Week), and I've been a contributor to websites The Script Lab, ScreenCrafting, The London Screenwriter's Festival blog, Movie Outline, Screenwriters Utopia, and The Buzz on Virtual Pitch Fest. I was recently interviewed by FILM COURAGE for their YouTube series about screenwriting and also named by Screencraft as one of the "Top 25 Screenwriters to Follow on Twitter." I also have written a popular screenwriting book  "A Screenwriter's Journey  to Success" now available on Amazon.

If your feature script, TV pilot, outline, or short script needs help, my real-world experience and insights can help you bring your project to the next level. Your screenwriting career is not some Dali-esque delusion, but the result of work, talent, focus, sacrifice, patience and luck—when a prepared screenwriter meets an opportunity and delivers the goods.


THE SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS / EDITING / PROOFREADING PACKAGE:     $ 275  (take $25 off - now $250 until MAY 31)


(Screenplays over 110 pages—$2.00 extra per page)

The package above includes:

  • In-depth analysis of the story, structure, concept, characters, dialogue, format, and style.
  • Detailed notes (5 - 10 pages) with page specific references and comprehensive suggestions on revisions to help fix the trouble spots in all aspects of the screenplay.
  • One screenplay edit that focuses on the details of standard formatting and proofreading for spelling, typos, grammar, and format.  E-mail me your script in Final Draft or a PDF. The script cannot be written in WORD or as a text document and must also be as close to the Hollywood standard  format as possible (this is not a script formatting course!).
  • Follow up e-mail correspondence to address questions on notes.

Re-read:  $175


THE TV PILOT PACKAGE:  Hour or half-hour formats:  $175  (take $25 off - now $150 until MAY 31)

It's the same consultation services as the screenplay package, but for TV pilots. (maximum 70 pages)

Re-read: $85




1 - 5   pages:  $50

5 - 10  pages: $75

10 - 25  pages  $125

25 - 40 pages: $175

In-depth analysis of story, structure, characters, and concept.  (40 pages maximum). 


Script length up to 20 pages. Same notes as feature package but for short scripts.


SKYPE VIDEO CALL - CAREER CONSULTATION: $50 per hour (one hour minimum).


Available in person in Los Angeles only or on Skype/Face Time.  $400 for one day consultation notes with a 2 hour in person or on Skype. Additional hours at $50 per hour. I can create a package suited to your specific needs.

  • Consulting on your overall career plans with advice and disciplines to achieve them.
  •  One screenplay consultation with notes and suggestions about changes.
  •  A copy of my new book "A Screenwriter's Journey to Success".


$475 (feature  script)

$375 (TV pilot script)

  • Includes a full consult with notes.
  • One hour Skype video call per week for four weeks about the notes and your career goals. 


  • The feature or TV pilot package (same length rules apply) with notes on two drafts of one script. Plus one week of e-mail correspondence for each.
  •  feature script  $375
  •  TV pilot  $ 250

All  payments for consultation services or mentoring sessions are made upfront to PayPal. Contact me and I will instruct you how to send payment to my Pay Pal account. You don't need a PayPal account to send  money from your credit card.


***Before you submit your project, please read the Terms and Conditions Submission Agreement listed at the bottom of this page after the client testimonials.

***  Five O'clock Blue, I, or any affiliated companies that I work with/for, have no interest in developing your project. It should be understood that the submission of your screenplay, pilot, treatment/outline, short screenplay, or mentor services is for paid consultation purposes only, and the criticism, notes, or suggestions you receive are yours to keep and  develop if you wish.  

Use the CONTACT FORM on the home page with any questions and to schedule your consultation. I look forward to helping you with your screenplay.


"What's unique about Mark is that he's a working screenwriter of films that  actually got made. So many 'script doctors' have never sold a single script. I trusted the first draft of my first feature to Mark, and I'm glad I did. The notes were thorough and reflect the rigors of working in Hollywood today." - Adam Vincent Wright, screenwriter of "Wise Guys"

"I first came across Mark being interviewed by Film Courage on YouTube. After visiting his web site, I scheduled a consultation and received invaluable notes on my comedy pilot. Do yourself a favor and get his insight on your script before sending it out. I will definitely use his services in the future." --Stephen Morrissey, screenwriter of "These Rock!"

"Mark's 5-star consultation service brings objectivity and clarity to a project with a fresh set of eyes. I recommend Mark and will consult with him in my future projects. His service is worth every penny." --Salvatore Bono, screenwriter of "Rock Tarpeian" and "Callers to Our World"

"This summer I reached out to Mark and hired him to do an analysis for a TV pilot I had written, and here's what I found: In complete consistency with my impression of him thus far, Mark showed up in the most professional way and over-delivered. I received back not only an analysis of my script, but what I call an entire learning package. It seems like Mark really studied the weakness of my work and addressed everything to-the-point with articulate notes that made it clear to me as to what I should be doing next. He combed through and did not leave one issue left unaddressed. His analysis proved once again that he is a master of his craft as well as an incredible teacher. I received script feedback before but nothing on this level, and I have no doubt I need to look no further - I found the one. Mark Sanderson is what I call a rare bird.

-- Kika Stayerman, screenwriter of "The Seaman's Wife"

"Mark was recommended to me by a screenwriter who had used his services for several scripts. Now that I've consulted with Mark, I'm yet another screenwriter who can enthusiastically recommend him!  Having never taken a screenwriting class, I knew I was likely making formatting and style mistakes -- I just didn't know what they were, or how to identify and fix them. Mark filled in the gaps in my knowledge and his detailed notes gave me a clear roadmap for how to fine-tune my script. He also provided tools and best practices that I know I'll be using in all of my writing going forward. I'm currently submitting my script to contests, and I've already had a glowing review come back noting how "polished and professional" it was. Thanks, Mark!"

—Zoe Furlong, screenwriter of "Mika Pepper Monster Hunter"

"Mark’s feedback helped me break bad writing habits that I didn’t even know I had. The level of detail provided in his coverage made me understand where the problems were and how to fix them. He pointed out strengths in  the script and not just weaknesses, which was a real morale booster. I was also amazed that he read the script more than once, which is above and beyond most coverage services."—Carrie Wachob, screenwriter of  "Hunters"

"Mark Sanderson is truly a master of the craft. I have used other script consultants in the past, but I have found Mark’s experience and knowledge invaluable. I received fully detailed notes and in-depth analysis of where my script fell short, and where my script excelled. My script is a TV holiday movie, and his  experience writing TV movies was very helpful to me. He gave some good  suggestions on how I can improve it, as well as work on the proper pacing and word count on this script. In addition to the notes, he gave  in-depth edits on the script that allows me to see where I can improve my dialogue and scene descriptions for a better read. I highly recommend Mark for a script consultation!" — Tim Northburg, screenwriter of "A  Love For Cranberries"

"After completing a hands on, 8-week screenwriting workshop, I got Mark to review my comedy feature film screenplay. He was next level, I couldn’t believe, not only how fast he turned it around, but understood my story and characters in-depth. His feedback was on point and he included just as many positive notes as critique, making me feel positive and excited about my work. I  would use Mark again and recommend him to anyone, new or experienced.  —Vanessa Ever-Burns, screenwriter of "Sologamy" from the land down  under. 

"Mark's immaculate feedback provided a clear, concise guide as to the strengths and weaknesses of our screenplay, highlighting what was and was not working, what there should be more and less of and - ultimately - inspired the next pass of drafting. His feedback is direct, honest, and impeccable. Highly  recommended!"— director/screenwriter Mark J. Blackman, screenwriter of  "Teardrop"

"I've used a few script consultant services now, and I can say without hesitation that Mark's was the most valuable.  While others were helpful in providing useful feedback on a certain component or area of my script, Mark's notes felt truly comprehensive.  I've incorporated his ideas to improve everything from general format/readability to the actual comedic elements.  I look forward to getting my next script to a point where I'm ready to leverage Mark's insight and guidance once again." — Carey Dunn, screenwriter of  "Materminated"

"There  are many "script consultants" out there. Many of them are more concerned about enhancing their careers than about you as a writer. What I look for is one who has the professionalism and experience to see what I can't see in a script—to be my second set of eyes and give me feedback that I can use to enhance my story. Mark Sanderson read my script three times in a matter of days and provided an overview and detailed page notes with very practical and thought-out suggestions to  enhance the script. You want someone who will take the time and personal interest to care about your work and about you as a writer.  No matter how experienced one may be, having that supportive feedback means a lot  in this journey.  Thank you, Mark!" — Britta Reque-Dragicevic,  screenwriter of "Restoration"

"If you are serious about your career as a writer, one of the best resources you'll ever find is Mark Sanderson. Mark doesn't give cookie-cutter, thoughtless advice, but he offers thorough, detailed and personalized service that is both  refreshing and reliable. He is professional, courteous, and genuinely  interested in your success. You won't regret the investment. You owe yourself the advantage of having Mark Sanderson on your side."— KV  James, screenwriter of "The Wren"

"Mark was not the only consultant who worked on my script. But he was BY FAR the best. Hands down. I did extensive research before I selected the consultants I availed myself of and the extent to which Mark's work rises above the rest is shocking. So much so that I literally scrapped the analyses and input from the others and went with Mark's feedback exclusively. He broke down my screenplay gently and effectively—and one of the most  helpful things he did was not just identify weaknesses but make actual  suggestions about how to fix them (e.g. "TRY this..." or "HOW ABOUT so  and so..."). He also explained why he made a certain recommendation or why he thought something didn't work. It will make future screenplays much tighter from the get go. He will make your screenplay a thousand  times better; he will make you so excited about rewriting/reworking it you will literally run to your computer to implement his feedback; and he will make you a superbly better writer along the way. Another thing: he's a super nice guy. I wholeheartedly endorse his services. Do  yourself a favor: USE HIM."—David Bassin, screenwriter of "Through the  Sweetness and the Smoke"

"Mark provides an enriched and detailed  description on how to grow your screenplay and writing. The criticisms force me to think about all aspects of the story and the specific suggestions allow me to jump quickly into a rewrite."—Moez Solis,  screenwriter of "Angel Tendencies"

"Thanks, Mark for pointing out what worked and didn't work in my script. Your notes were very professional and helpful in what I should do in my rewrites. You opened my eyes, flashed out all my bad writing habits, and helped me understand how to become a better writer."—Alexander Verdant, screenwriter of "War  Effects"

"I am blown away by your level of professionalism, expertise, and craft.  Every insightful suggestion is planned for reuse in my next edit. You provided something of amazing value to me, thank you! " —Kyle Walsh,  screenwriter of "Tiger Tiger"

"I hired Mark earlier in the year to help me with a comedy screenplay, his advice was valuable and it's since been requested by three producers and an agent. And later this  year, I needed help on structure and plot on a studio spec and yet again, Mark’s notes were incredible, detailed and insightful. He helped me see things that I didn't notice because I was so close to the  project. When I speak to producers, they tell me one of the biggest mistakes writers make is sending out scripts too early. Don’t be that writer. Get your screenplay read first by hiring Mark Sanderson."—Niraj  Kapur, screenwriter of "For Better or For Worse"

"I have hired many script consultants in the past, but Mark has to be one of the  finest. His critique of my work, and suggestions on how to improve it, without a doubt, has made the final product much more competitive and  ready to market to TV producers. In the future, I will not hesitate to call on Mark's services again. Thank you Mark for your support and great  advice!"—R. Lee Salkind Meliment, screenwriter of "Castleton Divide"

"I have used different script consultants, but I found Mark’s notes were so thorough, clear and brutally honest, I was able to go through them point-by-point, and came out with a markedly stronger and more marketable screenplay."—Ron Thomson, screenwriter of "Tour de Francine"

"Mark's  in-depth and thoughtful read inspired more confidence in pointing out strengths, weaknesses and suggestions for improvement. His notes were invaluable in making this a stronger and more marketable script."—Cyn  Brocar, screenwriter of "Kingfisher"

"Mercy just made the Page quarterfinals and I wanted to thank you. It would have never made it that far without your editing help. So thank you very much!"—Carrie  Wachob, screenwriter of "Mercy"

"Blunt and insightful.  Mark is like a hawk and could see the common, often repetitive, mistakes I made that I was oblivious to.  His suggestions helped reveal gaps in the story that my mind instantly started to fill.  In revision mode, he brings the format up to professional levels with pinpoint accuracy.  There’s so much advice that you will want to implement as you read  through his notes, that you’ll keep returning to them as you go along.  There’s no way this won’t take your screenplay to a higher level. Best money I've ever spent so far in the quest to become a  screenwriter."—Jordan Serson, screenwriter of "Day Dream"

"I've wanted to have my script read by a consultant, but shopping around in  Hollywood online everyone was asking $1500 or more. I found Mark when I  Googled him and he offered proofreading plus consultation. For the  price, I did not expect such thorough high-quality feedback and he didn't pull any punches. The great thing was his grasp of the story and characters, and then knowing (seeing) a proper structuring of the events. I could go on and on about his suggestions and educating me, but  to my knowledge, this is the best deal in Hollywood. So, you better take advantage of it while Mark is content to sell it at this price."—James Featherston, screenwriter of "Abattage Angels"

"I've  been writing for many years in fiction and non-fiction. But screenwriting is an entirely different planet. When I decided to take a  shot at writing a screenplay, I was overwhelmed by all the resources out there. I decided to dive in, buy software, and do my best. And then,  when I was done, I found Mark. And "that's" when I learned what to do and what not to do. Mark's critique was detailed but easy to understand, firm but encouraging, and I can tell he's a perfectionist. And he's making me one too! I can honestly say that my work with Mark was the equivalent of a screenwriting boot camp. I loved every minute of it. And I'll be back, for certain."—Aliya S. King, screenwriter of pilot  "Platinum"

"Mark was not the only evaluation I sought after finishing my first spec, but after receiving his notes and working with him, he will be in the future. Other services seemed to put me on the  bottom of their list, pushing me out then delivering sub-par recommendations. With Mark's help, I was able to focus in on the core of  my story and develop it from there.  He dives deeper than the surface and seeks out where your screenplay might be flawed. His notes were  specific, in-depth and extremely useful. He unearthed a gem in what have  otherwise been a pile of dirt. I can't thank him enough."—Michael  Brenckle, screenwriter of "Jackpot"

"Mark's gift lies in the fact that he's not only able to supply you with remarkably on-target insight and suggestions, but he's also able to inspire you to find a deeper and better version of your script. He understands your script, its strengths and weaknesses, and emboldens you to find the hidden genius within your own vision."—Paul Schattel, writer/director "Your Ass  Is Grass"

"I was hesitant about getting ascreenplay  consultation, because you hear a lot of mixed reviews. I'm so glad I did. Mark was the best thing to happen to my script. He gives really comprehensive and detailed advice.  He found issues that I didn't even know existed, and really helped me get to the essence of my story. I'm pretty certain I couldn't have gotten to that point without him. The dude knows his stuff.  I look forward to working with him on my next  project."—Rayna White, screenwriter of "It's Who You Know"

"Mark really worked for me. In my case I got script notes, general notes, the  whole nine yards. Easy to say I got my money's worth. If you want a successful screenwriter to take your screenplay seriously, meticulously comb over it giving you constructive contributions, work with your ideas to help you fill out your vision, Mark Sanderson is your man."—D.R.  Bradt, screenwriter of "Born to Kill 2015"

"Mark's notes were right on the money. He sees a movie in a script, no matter how good or bad it is and brings out the best it can be. I am fortunate my  screenplay passed through his surgical mind. Thanks, Mark for making me  happy with my words, my screenplay, my baby."—Njedeh Anthony Ebinum,  screenwriter of "Mind Crawlers"

"When I came to Mark for help, I  had a 136-page Sci-Fi screenplay that a Hollywood agent and director had criticized for being overwritten. With Mark's help, the script was not only pruned to 107 pages, but many subtle formatting and pacing issues were addressed.  To receive his extensive and detailed notes for such a reasonable fee was a real blessing, as was the kind and positive tone in which they were given.  Two other pluses I should mention about Mark's services are: (1) he is a working Hollywood screenwriter and (2) he takes a real personal interest in one's progress."—Ray Chesin,  screenwriter of "Blue Planet"

"I couldn't be more pleased with Mark's critique of my script. He's thorough, smart, knowledgeable,  detailed, passionate, experienced, encouraging, talented, and affordable. What else could you possibly want in a script  consultant?"—Jeff Thomas, screenwriter of "Cuda"

"After reading through Mark’s notes, it felt like I had participated in an intensive screenwriting workshop. He gave me so much insight into the process and provided helpful suggestions on how to improve my script. I have incorporated many of his ideas and am pleased with the final draft.  Thank you Mark for helping me take "Between Land and Sea" to the next level."—Joanne Guidoccio, screenwriter of "Between Land and Sea"

"Mark has the ability to take an idea and mold it into an amazing story that touches others. With years of creating great work, he has a grand insight into consulting on screenplays that is a true gift. My recent consulting experience with Mark has resulted in personal growth as a screenplay writer and a stronger screenplay then I could have ever imagined. I am proud to say Mark Sanderson is my mentor and an amazing teacher." —Faith Fay, screenwriter of "Game On"

"Your suggestions and notes were very, very, very insightful and helpful. They were so thorough and every point made sense. You didn't just outline problems,  but you suggested solutions to the problems which I admired. After  completing these changes, I read through my script again and it reads much, much stronger. There were points you brought up that I hadn't even thought of before or knew much about. Your service was worth every dime, and I will be using you from here on out. THANK YOU once again! I owe  you an Oscar speech!" —Justin Bamforth, screenwriter of "The Collectors"

"Mark' analysis exceeded my expectations on every aspect of my screenplay. I  needed a pair of new eyes, professional eyes, that could help me realize the true story behind my first draft. Now that my "first draft fugue" has cleared, I understand not only what my screenplay has been trying to convey, but how to convey it. I am now beginning to sense what a true re-write consists of, but I couldn't be happier with the clarity and precision of which Mark's notes have guided me. Thanks a million!" —Will  Stockton, screenwriter of "The Laugh Crafter"

"I wrote a feature comedy, but it turned out to be 274 pages when I finished it.  After  Mark came in, he taught me all about making a script "lean & mean."  In the end after his editing, the script came in at 102 pages. The Scriptcat really knows his stuff.” — Brad Grunberg, screenwriter of  "Final Exam"

“This was my second time to reach out for a  professional’s opinion. Mark's review, by far, was the most constructive and insightful. Well worth the money! Having feedback from someone who has already been there and done that is important to those of us who are amateur writers and do it for the joy of writing and creativity. Of course, we all have the dream of one day bringing the characters to life. Thank you for the detailed advice to improve my sitcom.” —Chris  Parman, screenwriter of “Tulsa’s Crude”

“Mark gave me great notes.  Being a professional screenwriter, he knows the industry  standards and gives not only advice that you would get from taking a screenwriting class, but also an experienced industry perspective.  A very reasonable, reliable, and helpful guy.” — Nick Josephs, screenwriter  of "As the Crow Flies"

"Thank you for handing me the insight to turn a good script into a great, exciting one. After using your notes and with any luck, my 'Legend of Sweet Revenge' will give me a shot at the proverbial 'Hollywood - Brass Ring.'  I'm excited. Thank you, Mark." — Frankie Carbone, screenwriter of "Legend of Sweet  Revenge."

"For anyone who is looking for a professional writer and script doctor, I would highly recommend Mark.  I'd say, if you are looking for a professional writer to walk that extra mile with you on your script, look no further!  My script is based in India, and he knew my story and the characters as well as I do. He is extremely dedicated  and into his work." — Earl Reginhard, screenwriter of "Zia"

"When I came to Mark with my screenplay I was stuck. I knew that it was too long, but wasn't sure where to begin cutting. Mark's advice was exactly on the money. Not only did he steer me in the right direction to get it where it needs to be, but he also gave me the feedback that I wasn't getting by having my friends read the script. Thanks!" — Tony Jones,  screenwriter of "Chuck My Life"

"Mark has been a tremendous help  to me. With the advice he gave me, I was able to make my script tighter, pacier, and more how I envisaged the finished version to be. Suffice to say, I now have one script with a producer and another has made the quarter finals of a screenwriting contest. I attribute the speed of both successes to having followed Mark's advice. Thank you, Mark." — Hilary  MacKelden, screenwriter/playwright of "Barabbas" and "Sammy" 




Please read carefully—by hiring  Mark Sanderson (Editor) for his screenplay consultation services, you  (Writer) and Mark (Editor) automatically agree to the terms and  conditions set forth below.

It is understood you (“Writer”) have read this agreement and you (“Writer”) hereby acknowledge and agree to all of the terms of the  agreement as stated below.

You (“Writer”) have written a screenplay or treatment/outline for a possible future theatrical motion picture production, television motion picture, TV series pilot, TV half hour or hour series, web  series, video game, or short film. Writer submits to Mark Sanderson  (“Editor”) the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment in the form of an electronic data  file via e-mail, for Editor’s evaluation and or proofing and editing.  The Screenplay or Outline/Treatment is being submitted under the terms and  conditions stated herein (this “Terms and Conditions/Submission  Agreement”).

Writer represents and warrants that he/she is at least eighteen (18) years of age, the sole owner and author of the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment;  that Writer has full right to submit it to Editor upon the terms and  conditions stated herein; that the consent of no other person or entity  is required to fully exploit the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment and none of the  rights granted herein will libel or defame any third party or otherwise  violate the rights of any third party, whether under copyright or  otherwise. Writer will abide by all applicable copyright and other laws  applicable to the Editor’s consultation, including without limitation  any notices or restrictions contained in this Terms and  Conditions/Submission agreement.

Writer has no obligations to Editor except as set forth in this  Agreement, and no other obligations exist or shall exist or shall be  deemed to exist between Writer and Editor.  There are no refunds for the Editor’s screenplay or outline/treatment consultation services.

Editor acknowledges that Writer and or his/her heirs represent and  warrant full ownership of the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment and all rights to  the material.

It is Writer’s sole responsibility to protect the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment, including filing or registering the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment with the  Writers Guild of America or the United States Copyright Office. Editor strongly recommends that Writer register the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment with one or both of the aforementioned parties.

If the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment is submitted by more than one person,  all instances of the word “Writer” herein shall be deemed changed to  “Writers” and this Agreement will be binding jointly and severally upon  all such persons (“Writers”).

NOW, THEREAFTER, in consideration of the premises and mutual  covenants herein contained, the parties (Editor and Writer) agree as  follows:

1. All information disclosed by Writer to Editor, in writing, whether or not such information is also disclosed orally, that relates or refers, directly or indirectly, to the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment,  including the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment itself, shall be deemed  confidential and shall constitute Confidential Information, and shall  include:

(i) all documents generated by Editor which contain, comment upon, or  relate in any way to any Confidential Information received from Writer,


(ii) any written samples of the Submission (“Screenplay”) or ("Outline") or (“Treatment”) received from Writer together with any information derived  by Editor there from.

2. Confidential Information shall not include any information:

(i)  That Editor can show by documentary evidence was known to  Editor or prior to the date of its disclosure to Editor by Writer or

(ii)  That becomes publicly known, by publication or otherwise, not due to any unauthorized act or omission of Editor or any other party having an obligation of confidentiality to Writer; or,

(iii)  That is subsequently disclosed by Writer to any person, firm or corporation on a non-confidential basis; or

(iv) That Editor can conclusively show by documentary evidence that  such information was developed independent of any access to the Confidential Information.

3. Writer will disclose the Confidential Information to Editor solely for the purpose of allowing Editor to evaluate and edit the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment submission.

4. Editor agrees to accept disclosure of the Confidential Information and to exercise the same degree of care to maintain the Confidential Information secret and confidential as is employed by the Editor to  preserve and safeguard his own materials and confidential information.

5. The Confidential Information shall remain the property of the Writer and shall not be disclosed or revealed by Editor.

6.  Editor shall notify Writer of any determination it may arrive at with respect to the further development of the submission, provided,  however, that, in doing so, Editor shall not directly or indirectly disclose any Confidential Information to any third party, without the  consent of Writer.

7. Nothing in this agreement shall be deemed a sale or offer for sale or option of the Screenplay or Outline/Treatment, and nothing contained herein shall in any way obligate Writer to grant to Editor a license or any other rights, directly or by implication. The Editor’s creative ideas,  notes and suggestions about the Writer’s Screenplay or Outline/Treatment, are  given to the Writer as part of the consultation service, and Writer is free to use or not to use the suggestions as desired. Editor holds no claim over creative suggestions offered as part of the consultation service.

8. Because of Editor’s position in the entertainment industry, his own ideas, his social media, creative collaborations, screenplays, screenplay assignments, outlines, treatments, TV pilots, video games, web series, short films, books, screenwriting services, consultation services, screenplay editing, workshops, webinars, blog articles, lectures, and teaching, he is  continuously exposed to screenplays, teleplays, novels, short stories, blog articles, newspaper articles, social media, formats, treatments, outlines, pitches, loglines, presentations, stories, films, web series, video games, and the like, which may be similar to those already developed by Writer or related parties, or to those otherwise related to Writer (and which may be based on underlying material owned  or controlled by Writer), and often many similar ideas or stories relate to one or more common underlying themes in different projects that may already exist. Writer shall indemnify and hold harmless Editor from and against any and all liability, judgments, claims, costs, damages, losses  and expenses (including without limitation costs and attorneys’ fees  whether or not in connection with litigation) arising out of or in connection with similar creative ideas.

9. No Professional Advice Guarantee or Promise:  The information contained in or made available by Editor in the  consultation of your screenplay or  outline/treatment for your theatrical movie, TV movie, TV half hour or hour series, web series, video game, or short movie, will not place Editor liable for any direct, indirect, consequential, special, exemplary or other damages, including economic loss, that may result from the use of, or the inability to use, the materials, information or strategies  communicated through the consultation, or any products or services  provided before or after the consultation, even if advised of the  possibility of such damages. Under no circumstances, including but not  limited to negligence, will Editor be liable for any special or consequential damages that result from Writer’s participation in the  consultation. 

To be clear:  You, the Writer, alone are responsible and accountable for your  decisions, actions and results in life, and by your participation in the consultation, you agree not to attempt to hold Editor liable for any decisions, actions, or results that you make or experience in business or in life due to your participation in this consultation at any time, now, or in the future, under any circumstance.

10. The screenplay consultation services (notes) delivered to Writer  by Editor in the form of an electronic data file via e-mail, may not be used or distributed or referred to in any public or private arena. Use or reference to these services (consultation notes) or the use of Mark Sanderson’s  name to endorse or promote any screenplays, outlines, or treatments in any way is  prohibited.

11. This agreement sets forth the entire agreement between the parties and may not be amended or modified except in writing signed by all of the parties.

12. This Agreement may not be changed, modified, terminated or discharged except in writing signed by both Writer and Editor. This  Agreement, regardless of where executed or performed, shall be governed  by, construed and enforced in accordance with the laws of the State of  California without regard to the conflict of law’s provisions thereof.