Screenplay Consultation Client Testimonials

It's one thing to read screenwriting books or watch films and try your best to write a screenplay according to those book(s). It's another thing to actually reach out for screenplay feedback from a working screenwriter who provides professional analysis of your project. 

Mark made those screenwriting books come alive for me in his analysis. As the first industry professional to put eyes on my screenplay, he provided detailed and constructive feedback and relevant input. His delivery was prompt, professional, and polite. Although I'm a novice, Mark delivered his knowledge in an understandable way. He didn't talk down to me or use complex industry jargon that I couldn't grasp. The critique was all-encompassing, encouraging, and left me feeling elated and motivated to incorporate his suggestions. I highly recommend Mark's screenwriter consultation services and look forward to working with him again in the future. If you are serious about your screenplay, invest in yourself and take that leap of faith with Mark. He truly wants you to succeed. 

—Sherry Frasier, screenwriter of "Dear William" 

Mark’s feedback is always on point. The biggest plus for me was the suggestions he made to make my script more visual. He goes through every line, every word, and provides detailed feedback. This level of detail in his script analysis is unmatched at his price point. He’s a great mentor and person. Go with the mentorship package; I can’t thank him enough for reading my many revised drafts multiple times! 

—R.R., screenwriter of "Permissible" 

I’m an emerging screenwriter who has had some success in contests. I was seeking feedback to elevate my short script and my writing ability to the next level. With his expertise, Mark definitely provided that! His general comments and line editing were thorough and perceptive. He helped me add character and plot clarity, cohesion, conflict, and tension. He raised issues that other readers completely missed! Mark doesn’t just point out shortcomings; he offers intuitive and workable suggestions as he did in his replies to my questions and edits. He kept to the schedule and communicated promptly. He offers incredible value, especially compared to other coverages. He truly cares, and it shows! I highly recommend him to anyone at any level of screenwriting. Thank you, Mark. 

—Jordan Lewis, screenwriter of "Mendokusai" 

What's unique about Mark is that he's a working screenwriter of films that have actually been made. So many 'script doctors' have never sold a single script. I trusted the first draft of my feature to Mark, and I'm glad I did. The notes in his screenplay feedback were thorough and reflective of the rigors of working in Hollywood today. 

—Adam Vincent Wright, screenwriter of "Wise Guys" 

The level of detail, meaty suggestions, coherent and easy-to-understand directions, general writing tips, logline help, and overall professional competency demonstrated by Mark in my screenplay exceeded all expectations. It’s clear he takes his craft seriously; the product he delivered validates his accumulated education and years of practical experience. I know I will learn, improve, and grow as a direct result of his guidance. A simple note of gratitude hardly does him justice. Thank you for your exhaustive efforts. 

—Kevin Bernadt, screenwriter of "An Ornament's Tale" 

I first came across Mark being interviewed by Film Courage on YouTube. After visiting his website, I scheduled a consultation and received invaluable notes on my comedy pilot. Do yourself a favor and get his insight on your script before sending it out. I will definitely use his services again in the future. 

—Stephen Morrissey, screenwriter of "These Rock!" 

Mark's 5-star consultation service brings objectivity and clarity to a project with a fresh set of eyes. I recommend Mark and will consult with him on my future projects. His service is worth every penny. 

—Salvatore Bono, screenwriter of "Rock Tarpeian" and "Callers to Our World" 

I highly recommend Mark's consultation services. Mark always responds thoroughly to my questions and genuinely cares about teaching me how to improve my craft. I can't recommend him enough—totally worth the price. Mark will become your screenwriting Sifu, too. 

—Corey Perkins, screenwriter of "Now and Forever" 

Mark Sanderson provided me, a first-time scriptwriter, with extensive notes to improve my project. He taught me many technical lessons to help the script meet industry standards. Mark also offered storyline suggestions that will dramatically improve pivotal moments in the thriller as I complete my rewrite. As a rookie, I wasn't sure where to turn for help, but Mark exceeded my expectations. Your project will be better thanks to Mark’s screenplay feedback. 

—Mike W., screenwriter of "There is Life" 

I cannot recommend Mark enough. He read my script and understood what I was trying to say more than I did. He pinpointed with clarity the areas of my script that needed condensing and showed me how to avoid micromanaging actors. Using his notes, I turned my script into a top 10% Nicholl script. Mark is a friend and an ally who genuinely wants you to succeed. He is realistic about the tough odds in the Hollywood market but encourages you to write with discipline first and foremost. Mark has helped me turn my dream into a more concrete reality. I am so grateful for his guidance, and you will be too. 

—Rachel Redfern, screenwriter of "She Wore Blue" 

Mark has been an invaluable help in the development and improvement of my script. I've used other coverage services, and no one even comes remotely close to providing the helpful, detailed notes and advice that Mark offers. I would have paid twice as much for the professional advice he has given me. 

—Dan Willis, screenwriter of "Mother of Grace and Mercy" 

This summer I reached out to Mark and hired him to do an analysis for a TV pilot I had written, and here's what I found: In complete consistency with my impression of him thus far, Mark showed up in the most professional way and over-delivered. I received not only an analysis of my script but what I call an entire learning package. It seems like Mark truly studied the weaknesses of my work and addressed everything to the point with articulate notes that clarified what I should be doing next. He combed through and did not leave an issue unaddressed. His screenplay feedback proved once again that he is a master of his craft as well as an incredible teacher. I’ve received script feedback before, but nothing on this level, and I have no doubt I need to look no further—Mark Sanderson is truly a rare talent. 

—Kika Stayerman, screenwriter of "The Seaman's Wife" 

Mark was recommended to me by a screenwriter who had used his services for several scripts. Now that I've consulted with Mark, I'm yet another screenwriter who can enthusiastically recommend him! Having never taken a screenwriting class, I knew I was likely making formatting and style mistakes—I just didn't know what they were or how to identify and fix them. Mark filled in the gaps in my knowledge, and his detailed notes provided a clear roadmap for how to fine-tune my script. He also provided tools and best practices that I know I'll be using in all of my writing going forward. I'm currently submitting my script to contests, and I've already received glowing feedback noting how "polished and professional" it was. Thank you, Mark! 

—Zoe Furlong, screenwriter of "Mika Pepper Monster Hunter" 

Mark’s feedback helped me break bad writing habits that I didn’t even know I had. The level of detail provided in his coverage made me understand where the problems were and how to fix them. He pointed out strengths in the script and not just weaknesses, which was a real morale booster. I was also amazed that he read the script more than once, which is above and beyond most coverage services. 

—Carrie Wachob, screenwriter of "Hunters" 

Mark Sanderson is truly a master of his craft. I have utilized other script consultants in the past, but I found Mark’s experience and knowledge invaluable. I received fully detailed notes and in-depth analysis of where my script fell short and where it excelled. My script is a TV holiday movie, and his experience writing TV movies was very helpful to me. He provided useful suggestions on how I can improve it, as well as work on the proper pacing and word count for my script. In addition to the notes, he conducted in-depth edits on the script, allowing me to see where I can enhance my dialogue and scene descriptions for a better read. I highly recommend Mark for a script consultation! 

—Tim Northburg, screenwriter of "A Love For Cranberries" 

After completing a hands-on, 8-week screenwriting workshop, I hired Mark to review my comedy feature film screenplay. He was next-level; I couldn’t believe how quickly he turned it around and how well he understood my story and characters. His feedback was right on point, and he included as many positive notes as critiques, making me feel excited about my work. I would use Mark again and recommend him to anyone, new or experienced. 

—Vanessa Every-Burns, screenwriter of "Sologamy" from the land down under. 

Mark's immaculate feedback provided a clear, concise guide to the strengths and weaknesses of our screenplay, highlighting what was and was not working, what there should be more and less of, ultimately inspiring the next pass of drafting. His feedback is direct, honest, and impeccable. Highly recommended! 

—Mark J. Blackman, director/screenwriter of "Teardrop" 

I've used a few script consultant services now, and I can say without hesitation that Mark's was the most valuable. While others were helpful in providing useful feedback on specific components or areas of my script, Mark's notes felt truly comprehensive. I've incorporated his ideas to improve everything from general format/readability to the actual comedic elements. I look forward to getting my next script to a point where I'm ready to leverage Mark's insight and guidance once again. 

—Carey Dunn, screenwriter of "Materminated" 

There are many "script consultants" out there. Many of them are more concerned about enhancing their careers than about you as a writer. What I look for is someone with the professionalism and experience to see what I can't see in a script—to be my second set of eyes and give me valuable feedback I can use to enhance my story. Mark Sanderson read my script three times in just a matter of days and provided an overview as well as detailed page notes with very practical and thoughtful suggestions to elevate the script. You want someone who will take the time and personal interest to care about you as a writer. No matter how experienced one may be, having that supportive feedback means a lot in this journey. Thank you, Mark! 

—Britta Reque-Dragicevic, screenwriter of "Restoration" 

If you are serious about your career as a writer, one of the best resources you'll find is Mark Sanderson. Mark doesn’t dish out cookie-cutter advice; he offers thorough, detailed, and personalized service that is both refreshing and reliable. He is professional, courteous, and genuinely invested in your success. You won't regret your investment. You owe it to yourself to have Mark Sanderson on your side. 

—KV James, screenwriter of "The Wren" 

Mark was not the only consultant who worked on my script, but he was BY FAR the best. Hands down. I did extensive research before I selected the consultants and Mark's work rises above the rest in a shocking way. It was so remarkable that I literally scrapped the analyses and input from others and went with Mark's feedback exclusively. He broke down my screenplay gently and effectively—and one of the most helpful things he did was not just identify weaknesses but suggest actual improvements (e.g., "TRY this..." or "HOW ABOUT such and such..."). He also explained why he made certain recommendations and why he thought something didn’t work. This will make future screenplays much tighter from the get-go. He will make your screenplay a thousand times better; you'll be so excited about rewriting and reworking it that you'll rush to your computer to implement his feedback, and he will make you a significantly better writer along the way. Another thing: he's a genuinely nice guy. I wholeheartedly endorse his services. Do yourself a favor: USE HIM. 

—David Bassin, screenwriter of "Through the Sweetness and the Smoke" 

Mark provides an enriched and detailed description of how to grow your screenplay and writing. His criticisms force me to think about all aspects of the story and his specific suggestions allow me to jump quickly into a rewrite. 

—Moez Solis, screenwriter of "Angel Tendencies" 

Thank you, Mark, for highlighting what worked and didn’t work in my script. Your notes were very professional and helped me understand what I should do in my rewrites. You opened my eyes, exposed my bad writing habits, and helped me become a better writer. 

—Alexander Verdant, screenwriter of "War Effects" 

I am blown away by your level of professionalism, expertise, and craft. Every insightful suggestion is planned for reuse in my next edit. You delivered something of immense value to me—thank you! 

—Kyle Walsh, screenwriter of "Tiger Tiger" 

I hired Mark earlier this year to assist with a comedy screenplay, and his advice was invaluable. It has since been requested by three producers and an agent. Later this year, I sought his help on structure and plot for a studio spec, and once again, Mark’s notes were incredible, detailed, and insightful. He helped me see things I didn't notice because I was too close to the project. When speaking with producers, they often say one of the biggest mistakes writers make is sending out scripts too early. Don’t be that writer. Get your screenplay read first. Hire Mark Sanderson. 

—Niraj Kapur, screenwriter of "For Better or For Worse" 

I've hired many script consultants in the past, but Mark is undoubtedly one of the finest. His critique of my work, along with his suggestions for improvement, has unquestionably made the final product much more competitive and marketable to TV producers. In the future, I won't hesitate to engage Mark's services again. Thank you, Mark, for your support and great advice! 

—R. Lee Salkind Meliment, screenwriter of "Castleton Divide" 

I have used different script consultants, but I found Mark’s notes to be thoroughly clear and brutally honest, allowing me to go through them point by point and come out with a markedly stronger and more marketable screenplay. 

—Ron Thomson, screenwriter of "Tour de Francine" 

Mark's in-depth and thoughtful read inspired more confidence in identifying strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions for improvement. His notes were invaluable in making my script stronger and more marketable. 

—Cyn Brocar, screenwriter of "Kingfisher" 

"Mercy" just made the Page quarterfinals, and I wanted to thank you. It would have never made it this far without your editing help. Thank you very much! 

—Carrie Wachob, screenwriter of "Mercy" 

Blunt and insightful, Mark is like a hawk, noticing the common, often repetitive, mistakes I made that I was oblivious to. His suggestions helped reveal gaps in the story my mind instantly started to fill. In revision mode, he elevates the format to professional levels with pinpoint accuracy. There’s so much advice you'll want to implement as you peruse his notes, making it guaranteed your screenplay will reach a higher level. Best money I've spent thus far in my quest to become a screenwriter. 

—Jordan Serson, screenwriter of "Day Dream" 

I've wanted to have my script read by a consultant for a long time, but shopping around in Hollywood online yielded fees of $1500 or more. I found Mark after Googling him, and he offered proofreading plus consultation. For the price, I didn’t expect such thorough, high-quality feedback, and he didn’t pull any punches. The remarkable part was his grasp of the story and characters, combined with a proper understanding of structuring the events. I could go on and on about his suggestions and educational insights, but this appears to be the best deal in Hollywood. Take advantage of it while Mark offers it at this price. 

—James Featherston, screenwriter of "Abattage Angels" 

I've been writing in fiction and non-fiction for many years, but screenwriting is an entirely different planet. When I decided to take a shot at writing a screenplay, I was overwhelmed by all the available resources. I invested in software and did my best. Then, when I completed my draft, I found Mark. That’s when I learned what to do and what not to do. Mark's critique was detailed but easy to understand, firm yet encouraging, and clearly stems from his perfectionism. He’s making me one too! I can honestly say my work with Mark was the equivalent of a screenwriting boot camp. I loved every minute of it, and I’ll be back for certain. 

—Aliya S. King, screenwriter of the pilot "Platinum" 

Mark wasn't the only evaluation I sought after finishing my first spec, but after receiving his notes and working with him, he'll be my go-to in the future. Other services seemed to overlook me, pushing my work out, and then delivering sub-par recommendations. With Mark's assistance, I was able to focus on the core of my story and develop it effectively. He dives deeper than just the surface and uncovers where your screenplay might be flawed. His notes were specific, in-depth, and extremely beneficial. He unearthed a gem in what could have otherwise been a pile of dirt. I can’t thank him enough. 

—Michael Brenckle, screenwriter of "Jackpot" 

Mark's gift lies in his ability to deliver not only remarkably on-target insight and suggestions but also to inspire you to discover a deeper and better version of your script. He understands your script—the strengths and weaknesses—and empowers you to reveal the hidden genius within your own vision. 

—Paul Schattel, writer/director of "Your Ass Is Grass" 

I was hesitant about getting a screenplay consultation because I've heard plenty of mixed reviews. I'm so glad I did; Mark was the best thing to happen to my script. His advice was comprehensive and detailed, finding issues I didn’t even know existed and truly helping me reach the essence of my story. I’m confident I couldn’t have achieved that without him. The guy knows his stuff. I look forward to collaborating with him on my next project. 

—Rayna White, screenwriter of "It's Who You Know" 

Mark worked meticulously for me. I received script notes, general notes—the whole nine yards. It's easy to say I got my money's worth. If you want a successful screenwriter to take your screenplay seriously, painstakingly comb over it, providing constructive contributions and helping you flesh out your vision, Mark Sanderson is your guy. 

—D.R. Bradt, screenwriter of "Born to Kill 2015" 

Mark's notes were spot on. He sees a movie in a script, regardless of its quality, and extracts the best it can be. I am fortunate my screenplay passed through his discerning eye. Thank you, Mark, for making me happy with my words, my screenplay, my creation. 

—Njedeh Anthony Ebinum, screenwriter of "Mind Crawlers" 

When I approached Mark for assistance, I had a 136-page Sci-Fi screenplay that had been criticized for being overwritten by a Hollywood agent and director. With Mark's guidance, the script was pruned to 107 pages, while addressing many subtle formatting and pacing issues. To receive his extensive and detailed notes for such a reasonable fee was a blessing, as was the kind and positive tone in which they were offered. Two other advantages I should mention about Mark's services are: (1) he is a working Hollywood screenwriter and (2) he takes a real personal interest in your progress. 

—Ray Chesin, screenwriter of "Blue Planet" 

I couldn't be more pleased with Mark's critique of my script. He’s thorough, smart, knowledgeable, detailed, passionate, experienced, encouraging, talented, and affordable. What more could you ask for in a script consultant? 

—Jeff Thomas, screenwriter of "Cuda" 

After reviewing Mark’s notes, it felt as if I had participated in an intensive screenwriting workshop. He provided so much insight into the process and offered helpful suggestions for improving my script. I have implemented many of his ideas and am delighted with the final draft. Thank you, Mark, for aiding me in taking "Between Land and Sea" to the next level. 

—Joanne Guidoccio, screenwriter of "Between Land and Sea" 

Mark has a unique ability to shape an idea into an amazing story that resonates with others. With years of experience in bringing great work to life, he possesses a remarkable insight into consulting on screenplays that is genuinely a gift. My recent consulting experience with Mark has resulted in personal growth as a screenwriter and a stronger screenplay than I could have ever envisioned. I am proud to say Mark Sanderson is my mentor and an exceptional teacher. 

—Faith Fay, screenwriter of "Game On" 

Your suggestions and notes were incredibly insightful and helpful. They were so thorough, and every point made sense. You didn’t just outline the problems; you proposed solutions which I admired. After implementing these changes, I reread my script and found it reads much stronger. There were points you raised that I hadn’t even considered. Your service was worth every dime, and I will continue to use you moving forward. THANK YOU once again! I owe you an Oscar speech! 

—Justin Bamforth, screenwriter of "The Collectors" 

Mark's analysis surpassed my expectations at every turn with regard to my screenplay. I needed a fresh set of professional eyes to help me uncover the true story behind my first draft. Now that my "first draft fugue" has dissipated, I understand not only what my screenplay has been trying to convey, but how to convey it. I am beginning to sense what a true rewrite entails, and I couldn't be happier with the clarity and precision that Mark's notes have provided. Thanks a million! 

—Will Stockton, screenwriter of "The Laugh Crafter" 

I wrote a feature comedy, but it ballooned to 274 pages by the time I finished. After Mark stepped in, he educated me on making a script "lean & mean," and ultimately the script was distilled to 102 pages. The Scriptcat really knows his stuff. 

—Brad Grunberg, screenwriter of "Final Exam" 

This was my second time seeking a professional opinion. Mark's review was, by far, the most constructive and insightful. Well worth the money! Having feedback from someone who has been through the process is invaluable to us amateur writers who write for the joy of storytelling. Naturally, we all dream of one day bringing our characters to life. Thank you for the detailed advice to improve my sitcom. 

—Chris Parman, screenwriter of "Tulsa’s Crude" 

Mark delivered great notes. Being a professional screenwriter, he understands industry standards and offers advice that would parallel the experience gained from a screenwriting class, blended with an insider's perspective. He’s a very reasonable, reliable, and helpful guy. 

—Nick Josephs, screenwriter of "As the Crow Flies" 

For anyone seeking a professional writer and script doctor, I wholeheartedly recommend Mark. If you're looking for an expert to journey with you through your script, look no further! My script is based in India, and he grasped my story and characters as well as I do. He is incredibly dedicated and passionate about his work. 

—Earl Reginhard, screenwriter of "Zia" 

Upon approaching Mark with my screenplay, I felt stuck. I understood it was too long but wasn’t sure where to begin cutting. Mark's advice was spot on. Not only did he guide me in the right direction to get it where it needs to be, but he also provided the feedback that my friends weren't able to offer. Thanks! 

—Tony Jones, screenwriter of "Chuck My Life" 

Mark has been a tremendous help to me. With his advice, I was able to tighten my script, enhance its pacing, and align it more closely with my vision for the final version. I now have one script with a producer and another that has made the quarterfinals of a screenwriting contest. I attribute both successes to following Mark's guidance. Thank you, Mark.